Note: All right goes to the writer of the
novel E.L.James i will just write it on my way and it would be both Ram and
Priya's POV
Part 1
A young girl who was
sitting in front of the mirror and was brushing her hairs…. was vry nervous…
Priya: today its my
first job interview….wat will they ask and wat would I say ggggrrrr….i m so
nervous …god plz help me …and I hope I would get this job
A girl walk with a
cup of coffee….
Neha: don’t worry u
will get this job …priya u r so talented and I bet u will get it …don’t be
nervous…. (neha is priya’s room mate and by profession a DJ )
Priya: I hope so
..she took the coffee and drank it ….and restrain her hair in a ponytail and
bid a good bye to neha
Neha: all the best ….
*
A man woke up and
half laying on his bed …lightning up a smoke ….and puffs it .... dark
personality … thinking abt his life and those scary nightmares ….he trashed the
smoke into the ashtray…and walks towards washroom to get ready himself for
office and to involved in his bzy life ….
*
Kapoor Industries
It’s a huge
twenty-story office building, all curved glass and steel…
Priya: relieved that
I’m not late as I walk into the enormous and frankly intimidating – glass,
steel, and white sandstone lobby.
Behind the solid
sandstone desk, a very attractive, groomed, young woman smiles pleasantly.
She’s wearing the sharpest charcoal suit jacket and white shirt.
Priya: I m here for
job interview.
priya tuck one of the
escaped tendrils of her hair behind her ear
woman:You’ll want the
last elevator on the right, press for the twentieth floor…. She smiles kindly
at her..
priya walk over to
the bank of elevators past the two security men ….The elevator whisks her with
terminal velocity to the twentieth floor…. The doors slide open, she confronted
by another desk of sandstone and another young woman dressed impeccably in black
and white …
“Miss priya, could
you wait here, please?” She points to a seated area of white leather
chairs….where already young boys and girls were there and waiting for the call
for interview …she sits down….
Two guys walking on
the corridor when one of them said …
Man:golf this week
ram…
Ram: with serious
face said..tomorrow…they both shake hands and one of them left while ram walk
towards his cabin ….
Women: morning sir
she stands from her chair and greets her boss….
Ram: morning miss
patel ….r the people ready for interview…
Miss patel: yes sir
…I ll send them one by one …
He walked inside his
cabin….and the interview begins ….5-8 people went inside and got rejected when
it was priya’s turn …
Miss patel: Miss
sharma …its ur turn …
She nervously stood
and walks inside the cabin ....
His office is way too
big for just one man… In front of the floor-to-ceiling windows, there’s a huge
modern dark-wood desk that six people could comfortably eat around… It matches
the coffee table by the couch. Everything else is white – ceiling, floors, and
walls except, on the wall by the door, where a mosaic of small paintings hang,
thirty-six of them arranged in a square. They are exquisite – a series of
mundane, forgotten objects painted in such precise detail they look like
photographs.
Apart from the
paintings, the rest of the office is cold, clean, and clinical…
his eyes shot up to
the girl who just walked in…hair tied up in a neat ponytail….just a lock on her
face …and wearing a nice dress...he was lost in her …
She is staring up at me and the office with wide almond
shaped eyes. She has a small, sweet face that is blushing … I wonder briefly if
all her skin is like that … flawless… and what it would like pink and warmed
from the bite of a cane…. Fuck…. I stop my wayward thoughts,…What
the fuck are you thinking…RAM.. This girl is too young…. She
walks…. and almost roll my eyes again. Yeah, yeah, baby, it's just a face,
and the beauty in only skin-deep... I want to dispel that
unguarded, admiring look from those big brown eyes…..
Showtime… ram…. Let's have some fun... My
inner subconscious is glaring through huge eyes smirking with his eyebrows
raised, nodding in approval..
Priya: morning sir…
Damn Her voice is quiet, shy, with an hesitant
musicality, and blinks erratically, long lashes fluttering over those big brown
eyes. She's quite attractive… She's all charmingly flustered, meek, mild… submissive. I
shake my head, bemused at where my inappropriate thoughts are going, leading me
into my secret lifestyle of a sex-driven sadist. Muttering some platitude, I
ask her to sit….she sat…
He’s watching me, one
hand relaxed on his lap and the other cupping his chin and trailing his long
index finger across his lips. I think he’s trying to suppress a smile.
she forward a file of
her documents towards him ….he got distracted and took it from hers and was
going through her documents …he closed the file and starts interviewing her …he
asked couple of questions and she answered it very well but nervously …
My stomach burning, twisting in bitter lust… the greedy
monster that is my subconscious glaring intently, nodding in approval. I mutter
my agreement and watch that flush creep slowly over her skin once more like an
invasion…while she answering those question and biting down on her full bottom
lip… Fuck! Her mouth. Why hadn't I noticed her sexy mouth
before…
It was so distracted even I forgot wat to ask her ...i
can ask those shitty questions later baby… But right now I don't give a flying
fuck, because I can't take my eyes off your god damn mouth!
She was sitting quietly and watching me shockingly as in
I wasn’t interesting in her answers …but baby u don’t know where I m bzy just
in u and ur voice ….i have to ask her another question… internally shaking my head at such ridiculous things to
consider. Ram… stop
this, now…
As I asked another question she answered… She tucks a lock of hair behind her
ear, distracting me from annoyance making me wonder what it would be like to
run my fingers through her long hair….
she is biting down on that lip again…. I ramble on,
trying yet again to distract myself from her mouth. Her glorious, sexy
mouth…Ram get a grip where the hell u r going ….u cant think like that abt her
….she is way too young and she deserves love ….i cant give her love….
Ram: that’s all
Miss.Sharma….the job is urs …he hands her file back …
Priya: thank u sir
…she smiled and was walking outside his cabin ….
Ram’s eyes stuck on
her ass…damn that ass…my inner subconssious glared me again ….grab that ass Ram
and spank it hard ….gosh …wat’s happenning to me …I remove those thought from
my mind …
Ram: priya….what I
was thinking when I called her name ….i mean MISS.SHARMA ..take the letter from
miss patel…
Priya: sure sir
When she called me
sir with that sexy and musical voice of hers….how it sound when I will took her
to my playroom and she will call me SIR….my inner subconscious again glares to
me….yes Ram u r going at the right path…..no…no…no …I didn’t want to listen to
my inner subconscious ….i don’t want to hurt this girl ...removing my thoughts
I continued ….
Ram: and be sure u
come on time …I don’t like my staff comes late and give me stupid kind of
excuse….
Priya: sure sir …I ll
be on time …she smiled and walks out …
Miss patel handed her
the envelope
Miss patel:
congratulations …may be sir have told u when u have to come…
Priya:yes he did
…such a KHADUS…she giggles ….
She press the
elevator button and was thinking….
He is khadus but when
I saw him y my body temperature rises …. He really is very, very good-looking.
It’s distracting. His burning brown eyes was gazing at me…and when he called my
name priya…it sounds good from his mouth …that voice of him….so
seductive..….damn he is my boss I shouldn’t think abt him like this aarrgg.. ..
My heart is
pounding…. The elevator arrives on the first floor, and I scramble out as soon
as the doors slide open… I race for the wide glass doors, and I’m free in the
bracing, cleansing, damp air of Mumbai. Raising my face, I welcome the cool
refreshing rain. I close my eyes and take a deep, purifying breath, trying to
recover what’s left of my equilibrium.
No man has ever
affected me the way Ram Kapoor has, and I cannot fathom why.
Is it his looks? His
civility? Wealth? Power? I don’t understand my irrational reaction….
21 comments:
nice strt
waiting for next part
pls update soon
Ur update reminds me of a English movie, a sadist Ram Kapoor will be an interesting one, continue
nice. wait is gonna kill
awesome start continue soon
waiting
Shaz nice start, i have read the whole series just now, it will be fun to read how you portray the characters and continue the story :)
As promised on twitter I am home and the first thing I did was to read this:)Kick Ass start Shaz..Better than the actual book for sure. Waiting for the next part. Pls update soon!!!
BALHSUPERFAN
hi me viny I really love this part superbly written
gr8 strt...cntinue soon
Hi it's Davina. Loving it!! I've actually read all the fifty shades so it's familiar. Can't wait to see how you develop Ram's character comparing him to Christian Gray!!!!
shaz i dnt knw wat 2 say..... jus continue soon.. ;)
thx ...will update soon..
dont know abt the movie hheheh...i hope i write it as i want ....will update soon
thx ....will update soon IA
thx...will do :)
thx for commenting ...i really love the novel so thought to pen it down in my way ...lets see how i will do it ...hope i dont make a mess lol
thx .... and will try to write it in a different way ...will update soon
thx viny :)
thx will update soon
hi davina good to see ur comment here ...thx... lets see how i will manage this ... hope i pen it down as i m thinking
hehheh u can say anything ...will update soon
nice start :) i ve read the original one :) hope u add something more :) :)
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