Bade acche lagthay hai

Bade acche lagthay hai
★·.·´¯`·.·★Before i saw you i dream★·.·´¯`·.·★ before i talked to you i heard voice and before i touched you★·.·´¯`·.·★ you had already stolen my heart★·.·´¯`·.·★

Sunday 14 April 2013

FF:Jism



thx to viny for siggy



PART 1




Starts off in a big mansion'. 

All the servants are cleaning around, they are cleaning the tables and making sure that everything looks perfect…a guy in his business suit walking downstairs …his servants greets him …he went and sat on his chair for his breakfast ….and he took the newspaper which was kept on the table …..he starts reading it …and was sipping his tea ….when a girl walks near him to serve him his breakfast….she was about to put it on his plate ….when she said …

Girl: your breakfast …I have made all of your favorite …with a smile she said …I hope you will like my hand made dishes …
He looked at her and throws the paper in the air with anger ….the guy was non other than RAJAT KAPUR ….a tycoon …who was married but never loved her wife and not given her that place ever …..he married for the sake of his father with that middle class girl ….
Rajat: (anger tone) how many times I have told u don’t ever try to behave as my wife …don’t u know what place u have in my life …..nothing just nothing ….subha subha mood off kar diya ….


He took his coat from the chair and walks outside the mansion …..where that girl was having tears in her eyes …she fell on the floor and cry her heart out …she hugged her legs and was cursing her faith ….

*
Rajat’s office
Sitting in his cabin with his girlfriend apeksha…
Rajat: sorry darling hamay aisay milna padtha hai ….i never thougt that I would hide our relation from everyone ….u know I cant do anything ...jab say who ladki meri life mai ayi hai my life become worst and I cant concentrate in anything …
Apeksha: relax rajat ….don't stress yourself thinking about that middle class girl …why are you spoiling your life …ok lets have dinner tonight at taj hotel…u and me ….and just y dinner ….i ll book a room too …then we both can have sometime alone to spend …she kissed his lips …and left his cabin …and he get involved in his work
*

Hotel Taj
Apeksha and rajat both sitting and enjoying their evening and their romantic candle light dinner
Rajat: baby I am so relaxed and happy
Apeksha: I know because you are spending your evening with me and a nice romantic dinner …thank god your so called wife doesn’t have any importance in your life ….otherwise…
Rajat: ssshhh ..he put his hands on hers and holds it ….don't spoil our evening by taking her name …I just want to talk about our self not about her….she smiles ….after finishing their food they went to reception and apeksha asked for the room keys which she booked ….rajat and apeksha walk towards elevator ….and was inside elevator and press the button …rajat was holding her hands ….and kissing them gently ….
Rajat: I missed all these …he kissed her lips softly …..
when apeksha’s phone rings …..she attend it as it was important ….
Apeksha: hello ….yes …ok I will be there in a while …
Rajat was like what’s this all ….
Apeksha: sorry rajat ….i have to go ….woh Ma ki thabiyat kharab ho gaye hai ….and papa had took her to hospital I have to go ….and I am sorry …..we ….before she could say something rajat put his fingers on her lips and shushed …..
Rajat: do u think that I would feel bad …your mother needs u more than me baby …..don't be sorr baby …..come on we have to rush to hospital ….
Rajat drives to hospital …..they both were about to come out from the car …..
Apeksha: rajat please u just go to your home ….i don’t want you to come with me ….you know papa will start his questions again ….so baby u go ….
Rajat: but baby I should be with you …..
Apeskha: pppllzzz rajat …you would not listen to me ….
He made an angry face and says ok fine ….she was about to leave …but she kissed him and says smile my baby ….and ab yeh ghussa us bichari middle claas priya pe math nikalna …she smiles …and lefts …he too droves off not to home but to bar …..
*
At bar
He sits and orders his favorite drink …where the loud music was playing …he was drinking continuously while the waiters were trying to stop him …but he was throwing his money at them ….he took the vine bottle in his hand and walks out of the bar ….drinking ….and cursing his faith ….he droves in his drunk state at home ….
*
Rajat’s home
Rajat: ppppprrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaa ……he screams her name ….till she came ….
Priya: what happen ….why are you screaming like this ….she sees the bottle in his hands ….aap nay phir say pe lee( you have drunk again) …she was about to take the bottle ….rajat pushed her hands ….
Rajat: don’t show your concern….you don’t have any right on me ….i called you because …I just want to say something to you ….you …you …you….made ….my life hell …..why do you came in my life ….fuck …you middle class …patha nahi dad per aisa kia jadoo kar liya jo who thumhay he apnay ghar k bahu bana diya …sirf bahu he q you are the owner of whole KAPUR INDUSTRIES ….he throws the bottle in anger …..and walked towards his room ….he was tripping ….priya went near him and give him support …and walk towards room ……she give him support till his bed ….where he falls and was mumbling ….priiiyyyaaaa ….why you came in my life …..i hate you ….hate you ….she was having tears in her eyes….she settles him on bed and took his shoes off and covers him with duvet ….and walks towards the couch where she sleeps ….she was crying silently and in few minutes she falls a sleep ……



19 comments:

Anonymous said...

nice and interesting story I love the 1st part but plz u update soon yeh na ho ke hum story hi blooh jaaye when u update next

Anonymous said...

Ram Ram Ram whr is he ??? (From Karan, Ur fan)

Anonymous said...

Oye ye kya ho rha hai ....priya aur rajjo ewwww

Unknown said...

Ram kaha gaya yaar uff yeh haddi ko bagao jaldi hw dare he hurt priya
Good part continue soon

Unknown said...

gud strt
waiting or next part
update soon
and pls update more os

Chitra said...

great start. Now keep giving the updates

Anonymous said...

wow di again a nice concept...loved it

shilly said...

nice begining.. waitng eagerly 4 nxt part continue sooon.... :)

S-Raya said...

thx ... will update soon ...will not make my readers to wait for so ling time hehehee story nahi bhoolnay doo gi lol

S-Raya said...

hehehhe Ram bhi a jaye ga ...wait for the update

S-Raya said...

hehheeh i know it would be difficult for u to tolerate rajjo with priya but story abhi baaki hai meray dost

S-Raya said...

heheh ram bhi a jaye ga ...yeh tho start hai tho thoda sa tolerate karo rajjo ko

S-Raya said...

thx ...will update soon

S-Raya said...

thx .... will update soon

S-Raya said...

thx :)

S-Raya said...

thx ...will update soon

Sudipa said...

nice start Shaz bt where is Ram or ye kya Priya or Rajat yuck waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon

S-Raya said...

thx...i know starting is irritating for u guys ..will update soon

Unknown said...

ITS VERY NICE STORY UPDATE SOON